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  1. FamousxMindset

    FamousxMindset Slow your role, Sparkle.

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    Somehow I was given the responsibility of writing the cheer for this year. My first time writing something other than a voiceover. We are tying to ignore as many cliche's as possible. I have this written any tips on improving would help, and it needs to be longer as well.

    Our rstyle you want it
    Our skills you cant believe
    Stronger than before
    Its all about the green!
    You name we’ve won it
    You claim it we’ve earned it
  2. cheerforeverever

    cheerforeverever I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    A couple questions:
    - Is this a competition cheer? If so, where will you be competing it at?(different companies have their own styles and the scoresheets will want certain things)
    -How long does this cheer have to be? (check the scoresheet)
    -What are your school colors/mascot/etc.? (so the rest of us can help with verses if you want)
    -Can you give a couple examples of "cliches" so we know what to avoid?

    If we have more info, I think the board will be able to assist you better.

    As for critiques, I'd be careful with the cheer sounding too"cocky"....At some competitions it will work against you to have a cheer that gives off the impression of not being humble so to speak. When a team talks about how great they are or kind of puts another team down (we've won it all, we're better than all of you, your team will lose so watch and learn), some judges will not look kindly on that. I guess what I'm trying to get across is that you want to sound confident (we're here to shine and will prove it to you) vs. cocky (we have already won, everyone else is jealous of us). You can get away with being more cocky in allstars but usually not so much for school comps

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    Let me know if you want help with all of this, because I love brainstorming for this sort of stuff!
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  3. INeverStopCheering

    INeverStopCheering I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    I love writing cheers. I'm assuming (based on FAME) that this is a VA high school, so a 1 minute cheer. Make sure you stick with the rhyme scheme.

    Our rstyle you want it A
    Our skills you cant believe B
    Stronger than before C
    Its all about the green! B

    You name we’ve won it
    You claim it we’ve earned it

    The bold is good, you have an ABCB rhyme scheme where the 2nd and forth verses rhyme. But then you switch over to an AA rhyme scheme. If you do that, it will kill the flow. I understand the "cliches" you're trying to avoid. Stuff like "we're back and we're better" etc. You want to get creative words in there on lines A and C because they don't have to rhyme with anything. here are a couple stanzas to get you going.

    You may have heard the rumors
    We assure you that they're true
    (High school name here)
    is coming after you!

    Our style, you want it
    Our skills you can't believe
    Stringer than before,
    It's all about the green

    If you think you can stop us
    We suggest you think again
    Cause the (School name, Mascots)
    Are in this, to win

    There's no other who can do it
    Like the (color, color, white)
    (____-H-S)
    Will wear the crown tonight
  4. FamousxMindset

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    Green Gold
    Bruins
    Bethel
    This is a competitive squad tryout cheer and will most likely end up as the actual cheer. We are trying to avoid the stronger than before, were the best, or number one etc. The style of cheering is hear is a little more agressive than some states lol. I will take ANY help lol.
  5. cheerforeverever

    cheerforeverever I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    Bethel (x) Cheer
    Born to wear the gold
    We're coming for the trophy
    Now you've been told

    Our style, you want it
    Our skills you cant believe
    Stronger than before
    Its all about the green!

    So step off our throne
    and hands off the crown
    B-R-U I-N-S
    It's a showdown!

    We're (# of athletes) fierce
    and you'll be obsessed
    So stand up and shout
    B-H-S

    Bethel (x) Bruins
    B-H-S

    Bethel(x) Bruins
    B-H-S

    In two thousand twelve
    time to conquer this night
    Achieve it, together
    Green (x)
    Gold(x)
    White(x)
    (x)(x)
    Go Bruins!
  6. kidsspotcheercoach

    kidsspotcheercoach Cheer Stalker

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    Hey! I am an allstar coach and have to come up with a 30-40 sec cheer for a rec team in our area.. and being an allstar coach.. I have only made like a cheer thats 4 lines. ha. so Can any one help me? I can message the info to you if you can help!!
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    cheerforeverever I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    PM me and I'll give it a try
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    I just gave this a shot so I hope I helped!

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    One top spot
    one top contender
    Green the team to remember

    Our style,
    you want it
    Our skills,
    you cant believe
    Stronger than before
    Believe in green!

    Bethel team keep the dream alive
    All that matters is what's inside.

    Green
    gold
    white
    Lead the way.
    We
    Know
    what's at stake!

    It's an all out battle
    we were born for this
    Bethel,(x)
    Bruins (xx)
    this is it!
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    Sierra I'm new. Don't Hurt Me

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    PM me I could try it. I like brainstorming this kind of stuff.

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  10. Seeker30

    Seeker30 I think I can mix Cheer Music

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    Hey Guys i posted my own thread sorry. but if anyone can help.
    my colors are Cardinal Gold and white
    Roosevelt High School
    Mascot Rough Riders
    Riders for short.
  11. INeverStopCheering

    INeverStopCheering I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    I saw your other thread, do you want a wordy cheer (like above) or a chant?
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    Seeker30 I think I can mix Cheer Music

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    im confused by what i want. but i think i want a wordy cheer.
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    cheerforeverever I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    This should be around :30 (I tried to keep it short) and is wordy for the first part, but breaks out into crowdleading for the end..... That end part could always be modified though to one more verse of wordy cheer if desired.


    R(x) H-S
    Roosevelt, that’s Right!
    We won’t be stopped
    In the Cardinal, Gold and White.

    So Ri-ders, cheer with us (x)
    Shout from the crowd
    For two –thousand twelve
    It’s our time now!
    (use signs in preps, etc. to crowdlead maybe after this part)
    Yell R (2,3,4)
    H (2,3,4)
    S (2,3,4)
    Ri-ders, the best!
    (yell with us!)
    R (2,3,4)
    H (2,3,4)
    S (2,3,4)
    Ri-ders, the best! (make “the best” in a higher/excited voice to end)
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    Seeker30 I think I can mix Cheer Music

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    youve met my indecisive needs<3 thank youuu! <3
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    Corsicab I make my own voiceovers

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    You guys are awesome!! Here is one for you:

    I'm looking for a competition style 45sec to 1 min cheer. It is more NCA style than UCA meaning that there isn't a lot of crowd participation and more like a story. Colors are Black, Purple, and Teal. Name is Competitive Edge Cheer and mascot is Cats. This is for a rec team. And go!

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    WC Coach I'm new. Don't Hurt Me

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    I agree you people are awesome at these cheers/chants. I would appreciate having a few too. When we perform I always try to make up a longer cheer thats upbeat and positive. Then we move to a dance formation while performing a chant. I like things that rhyme and I like to do something new everytime we perform. So I am open to having several if you all dont mind. I am also trying to avoid the stronger than before, were the best, or number one etc. The words you always here in cheers.
    Washington County Tigers
    Red, Black and White
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    cheerforeverever I'm an announcer on CBS for Worlds (or should be)

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    This one may need another verse to fit your time limit possibly, but here's what I came up with in spare time this week:

    Our moment has arrived
    We’ve got the edge this time
    Forever competitive
    The Cats are back to shine

    So watch us excel
    We’re In the spotlight now
    Black, Purple, Teal
    No doubt, we’ll make you proud

    The cameras are on us
    And we won’t let you down
    One hundred percent
    We’ll wear the crown

    So Yell C-E-C
    Live it, learn it, love
    Competitive Edge Cheer
    Yeah, we’re a step above

    Reaching for our dreams
    To-gether we fight
    C-A T-S
    This is our night!
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    thats really good

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  19. Corsicab

    Corsicab I make my own voiceovers

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    Holy cow!! You should go into business!!!

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    Thank you!! I love it!! And here I thought I wouldn't be able to get our name into a cheer. Lol!
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    Jay Cole I'm new. Don't Hurt Me

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    Hey guys I'm an all star cheer coach and I also do choreography. Well I am now doing choreography for this competition high school team and I have to come up with a 1min cheer for them. I can come up with everything but the cheer. Can you guys please help me come up with the words for the cheer this part of school cheer is completely new to me. Here is the info for the team;

    The colors are: Red, Gold and White,
    Name of school: Jefferson High School,
    Masocot: Jay-hawks
    City: Rockford

    Please help me! Thank You guys

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